http://blip.tv/wingateschool/no-eating-2301948
2 things I liked about it
--I liked how they zoomed in and repeated the scene for emphasis when the guy took out his food which was not allowed and when the teacher was hitting the guy with crutches. Also the camera angle was great when his feet was being dragged in the room, it was angled at the bottom, so that was the main focus and was in view.
--I liked how they transitioned from scene to scene. It wasn't too much following around, it showed us a good view of where the setting was, and then the main parts. It moved on well when they were walking, then when the were in a different room.
2 things that can be improved
-- They could have added some dialogue in the scene of when they found the crutches in the dustbin and when they were chatting, because when I first watched it, it wasn't clear to me.
--They could maybe have added some color when necessary, like at the end, when they found the guy locked in a room or when the girl screamed because it would add more drama to it.
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